lz有个英语作业是关于翻译《滁州西涧》的

独怜幽草涧边生，上有黄鹂深树鸣。
春潮带雨晚来急，野渡无人舟自横。

然后lz翻译成了这个鬼样（

I like nothing but the grass that grows in the gloomy valley by the side of the stream.
I hear nothing but the warbler's song in the deep thicket.
I see nothing but the spring tides are rushing with rain of evening.
I feel nothing but the unattended boat transverse in center of the river slowly.

求助有木有语法错误，以及有无改进之处。