没错，又是英语作文

肝了一晚上，终于写出了一篇，请各位大佬看看有没有语法错误，或在初中范围内，是否有可替换的高大上词组。希望大佬们给点建议，也可在下方讨论，谢谢

Less stress,better life

Recently,people have more and more stress.Some of them may cry even kill themselves because of the pressure.

We should take them seriously.It’s commoner and commoner in our life.Most of students have to take so many after-school classes that they don’t have enough time to sleep.Then kids were sleepy and fell asleep while teacher was teaching new things.When they get home,they wasn’t able to finish homework.So children were going to be sleepier than yesterday.Students are too tired to study.

I think children should have more time to play and learn what they like.They shouldn’t be study machine.Too much pressure is not good for their development. All of the kids like playing in the nature .They need to take breaks away from homework and run with their best friends.

To make them happy and relaxed,their parents shouldn’t push them so hard or compare them with other children.They need to communicate with their kids so that they can understand how their kids think about life and teach them how to face difficulties by a right way.

I guess students will get better grades if they can live happily and healthily.Or they will hate learning knowledge.Less stress,better life.